There have been quite a few book reviews written on my The Art of Naming: A Muslim Woman's Journey. But I would like to share with you the latest, reviewed by Dr Norman Simm of New Zealand.This appeared in a journal called Matrix. For those who haven't bought your copies, please get them from MPH Midvalley or email me direct at Faridah dot Manaf at gmail dot com
Nor Faridah Abdul Manaf.2006.The Art of Naming: A Muslim Woman’s Journey./Satu Perjalanan Wanita Muslim. Subang Jaya: Awards Publishing.123pp.ISBN 983-42784-0-3.
Reviewed by Norman Simms, University of Waikato, Hamilton, New Zealand.
Half in English, half in Bahasa Malaysia, this little book of poetry, with an introduction by Susan Sheridan praising the author’s feminist credentials, confirms our first impression that this is a very important document in a world filled with fanaticism, hatred and ignorance. It is not just that Nor Faridah writes in clear, crisp verses about her pride in being a Muslim woman at a time when to so many in the West (at least) that seems, if not an erroneous then at least a foolish thing to do, but that her poems celebrate her own education, world-travels, and wide-circle of friends in diverse cultures and countries, something the press of the daily news makes us sit up and think about – for we are made to feel it is politically correct only to focus on different people in their own little nationalistic spaces. But here in this Muslim woman’s modest and understated poetic lines is the true meaning of cosmopolitanism, as well as of tolerance and compassion.
There is nothing political in Nor Faridah’s poems. They are about herself, her family, her friends, about being a foreign student in New Zealand, Australia and the UK, about getting married, having children, and pursuing a career, about thinking, feeling, loving and being in the world. They are also poems about poems and other literary experiences. But they are not simplistic and nice, sweet or sentimental;rather they are disarmingly brief, cutting, to the point because being in the world for anyone, especially a Muslim woman in the early twenty-first century, is no easy or light matter. Take, for instance, this brief piece called “Balancing acts in Hanoi”:
The vegetable woman
Walks as if on a tight
Rope
But life is not a
Circus
If not here, she would be serving
Some white
Men too hungry for
Asian flesh and sweat.
Though I can’t tell what wonderful musicality and wit there might be in the Malay version of this poem, it is quite clear that a powerful sense of the need to expose injustice in the world and speak for those who are maltreated drives the plainspoken voice of this poet.
In another poem the topic of which seems so odd to the eyes and mind of a modern Western reader some other kind of rhetorical game is played. “The veil which is me” begins with these opening lines and also says what can only be a shock, a provocation – a shock to middle-class secular sensibilities, a provocation to prejudices about traditional roles of women in patriarchal religions:
The veil which is me
Is also my body my mind
The absence of punctuation reduces the chance of rationalizing away the implications of such a statement. Then the reader is irked even more when addressed directly and told not to impose his (her) tastes and expectations:
Never wonder the length of my
Hair
Or ask to know its colour
Unveil it, says the wind
Show us your poetry
But who does the wind speak for here – some kind of universal or local voice of disapproval? But to show poetry in this way is an impertinence, a violation of the woman’s own integrity as a person, a Muslim, a poet. What text we are reading is doing is challenging us not to know in the normal way we think we ought to know what poetry is, a natural wind-born assumption, but to accept our own position of ignorance about some things in order to appreciate others, those which the poet will allow us to see and hear, and therefore to take the things we do not know about as a condition for being privy to the rest of the work of literature. Hence the poem goes on:
But poetry must never be written
for the wind
An imagined swaying audience
Must never be
My poetry is for the sea
It would never undress itself
For something sacred simply be
Yes, some things must be simply be accepted, taken as given, and what is sacred, what does not belong to the world that can be questioned or ordered to explain itself, is here taken as oceanic, profound, vast and over-whelming. Yet there is, at the same time, something very disturbing about this implied contrast between the wind and the sea: both sway. It may be that this ambiguity, this problematical relationship between what is allowed and what is forbidden, is below the surface if but for an instant. The mystery is too dark to be explained here.
Other mysteries exist, aside from what is hidden to non-Malay readers, particularly in the private and intimate poems alluding to persons, events and feelings perhaps known to the poet herself and no one else. Nevertheless, it is this sense of deeply private that balances the poems of ideological and religious statement. Hence we find “Love Thoughts (in memory of…)”:
like butterflies they stay awhile
and ‘out of season’ rain brings
chills
to the heart…
it’s like loving someone
is too mysterious to be expressed in a little poem of this sort. Yet there is more, another two short lines:
The veil, poetry and me
A float which never swims.
Three separate but related, contiguous but which is not equivalent to or mirrored, things, like the veil, the body, and the mind in the second line of the poem. The contrast here is between the float and what swims, what rests calmly above the sea perhaps moved by the wind and what cuts through the waters exposing what.
Reviewed by Norman Simms, University of Waikato, Hamilton, New Zealand.
Half in English, half in Bahasa Malaysia, this little book of poetry, with an introduction by Susan Sheridan praising the author’s feminist credentials, confirms our first impression that this is a very important document in a world filled with fanaticism, hatred and ignorance. It is not just that Nor Faridah writes in clear, crisp verses about her pride in being a Muslim woman at a time when to so many in the West (at least) that seems, if not an erroneous then at least a foolish thing to do, but that her poems celebrate her own education, world-travels, and wide-circle of friends in diverse cultures and countries, something the press of the daily news makes us sit up and think about – for we are made to feel it is politically correct only to focus on different people in their own little nationalistic spaces. But here in this Muslim woman’s modest and understated poetic lines is the true meaning of cosmopolitanism, as well as of tolerance and compassion.
There is nothing political in Nor Faridah’s poems. They are about herself, her family, her friends, about being a foreign student in New Zealand, Australia and the UK, about getting married, having children, and pursuing a career, about thinking, feeling, loving and being in the world. They are also poems about poems and other literary experiences. But they are not simplistic and nice, sweet or sentimental;rather they are disarmingly brief, cutting, to the point because being in the world for anyone, especially a Muslim woman in the early twenty-first century, is no easy or light matter. Take, for instance, this brief piece called “Balancing acts in Hanoi”:
The vegetable woman
Walks as if on a tight
Rope
But life is not a
Circus
If not here, she would be serving
Some white
Men too hungry for
Asian flesh and sweat.
Though I can’t tell what wonderful musicality and wit there might be in the Malay version of this poem, it is quite clear that a powerful sense of the need to expose injustice in the world and speak for those who are maltreated drives the plainspoken voice of this poet.
In another poem the topic of which seems so odd to the eyes and mind of a modern Western reader some other kind of rhetorical game is played. “The veil which is me” begins with these opening lines and also says what can only be a shock, a provocation – a shock to middle-class secular sensibilities, a provocation to prejudices about traditional roles of women in patriarchal religions:
The veil which is me
Is also my body my mind
The absence of punctuation reduces the chance of rationalizing away the implications of such a statement. Then the reader is irked even more when addressed directly and told not to impose his (her) tastes and expectations:
Never wonder the length of my
Hair
Or ask to know its colour
Unveil it, says the wind
Show us your poetry
But who does the wind speak for here – some kind of universal or local voice of disapproval? But to show poetry in this way is an impertinence, a violation of the woman’s own integrity as a person, a Muslim, a poet. What text we are reading is doing is challenging us not to know in the normal way we think we ought to know what poetry is, a natural wind-born assumption, but to accept our own position of ignorance about some things in order to appreciate others, those which the poet will allow us to see and hear, and therefore to take the things we do not know about as a condition for being privy to the rest of the work of literature. Hence the poem goes on:
But poetry must never be written
for the wind
An imagined swaying audience
Must never be
My poetry is for the sea
It would never undress itself
For something sacred simply be
Yes, some things must be simply be accepted, taken as given, and what is sacred, what does not belong to the world that can be questioned or ordered to explain itself, is here taken as oceanic, profound, vast and over-whelming. Yet there is, at the same time, something very disturbing about this implied contrast between the wind and the sea: both sway. It may be that this ambiguity, this problematical relationship between what is allowed and what is forbidden, is below the surface if but for an instant. The mystery is too dark to be explained here.
Other mysteries exist, aside from what is hidden to non-Malay readers, particularly in the private and intimate poems alluding to persons, events and feelings perhaps known to the poet herself and no one else. Nevertheless, it is this sense of deeply private that balances the poems of ideological and religious statement. Hence we find “Love Thoughts (in memory of…)”:
like butterflies they stay awhile
and ‘out of season’ rain brings
chills
to the heart…
it’s like loving someone
is too mysterious to be expressed in a little poem of this sort. Yet there is more, another two short lines:
The veil, poetry and me
A float which never swims.
Three separate but related, contiguous but which is not equivalent to or mirrored, things, like the veil, the body, and the mind in the second line of the poem. The contrast here is between the float and what swims, what rests calmly above the sea perhaps moved by the wind and what cuts through the waters exposing what.
7 comments:
Folks, Wong Phui Nam is one of our pioneering poets who wrote in English.Finally, I got the guts to give him a copy of my book in return of two of his latest (An Acre of Day's Glass and his play Anike)The guru wrote this:
I appreciate your feel for words and the subtlety underlying the apparent simplicity of some of the lines.
I am happy to see that there are poets much younger than myself writing. I wish there were more like you. Malaysia needs her poets.
Phui Nam
So to aspiring poets: fear not of writing or exposing your talent.Someone somewhere (even the guru) will say something nice. :)
Congrats Dr. Faridah! I enjoy reading your poems too :)
I bought it the moment I saw your name on the cover. I wish I could have brought it when we met up in PD during the Persuratan seminar. I'd love it so much if you could've written something or signed the book for me :)May be next time when we bump into each other again.
I also started writing in Malay in my latest entry :)In fact, I quoted you in one of my comments. It's about, when you said, how we should spend more time reading so as to improve our grasp of language.
Hope to see more creative churn-ups from you. You have my undivided supports, Dr. Faridah!
Dr Faridah,
I've seen this book at ujanailmu.com. I didn't know it was written by you.
I will buy one. Any chance I can get a signed copy? :)
Nashe,
I'm happy to know that you're focused on completing your 'calling' to writing.Hope to see it in print soon.
Mr Jiwa Rasa,
Every little support shown for local writers/publishers/distributors will go a long way (you support ujanailmu, our Msian amazon.com too)Thank you.May your kindness return back to you.Whenever you are back in IIUM, look me up and I will sign the book for you, InsyaAllah. :)
I was at UKM talking about my book yesterday.Looking at the expressionless look of the students, I thought aha..wrong crowd to speak about poetry or Islam.
It took the class (all 65 of them)a while to warm up and I had very nice questions from a couple of students in the end.
I sold all copies I brought to UKM.The students were enthusiatic readers and I received more questions then.I was pleasantly surprised.Must thank Dr Ruzy, Dr Noraini and Dr Fauziah for allowing me to talk to their students (I went to examine one thesis but had an hour or so and their class was on so ...it was a good meeting)
I was at Francesca Beard's workshop yesterday (sponsored by the British Council).Oh wow! She's a dynamite! I love this very energetic, intelligent, funny and warm performer! She's half-Malaysian too! :)
Will write an entry on her and the workshop in a bit.Meanwhile, you may google her.
And this is the sweetest and most touching response of my book:
I left the Art of Naming on the table when I went out for dinner last nite, when I came back,my friend said "tis woman is brilliant, her poems are so funny, touching and so honest", we fought to read, English and Malay, back and forth, I woke up tis morning to continue reading, now I remember the day I arrived home when my mother died 43 days ago, I had to stay calm infront of men and women of the village.After reading your 'Death of a great man', I remember that great woman who brought red apples from Singapore for her children.I cried alone under the reading light, thinking of the red apple.
Al fatihah to your mom,Z.Thanks for this touching response.It would take a while to allow everything to sink in, I know.
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